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March 02, 2011, 06:44
shufitz
Limerick game – the Arabic revolutions
I’d wanted to select a place-name honoring the momentous popular revolutions sweeping the Arabic word – but I couldn’t come up with a suitable place. “Tripoli” and “Cairo” seemed too difficult to rhyme. But just when I was about to surrender and select a less newsworthy place, the perfect one popped to mind.

Our locale will be Tunis, the epicenter from which the revolutions have spread. If you’re more adventurous, you may instead use Tunisia.

Send me a PM with your offering.
March 02, 2011, 10:44
Kalleh
Thanks! I think I'll stick with Tunis.

Yes, the times are interesting, both nationally and internationally. In the U.S., nationally we are seeing legislators fleeing their states to avoid being forced to vote on the budgets being proposed...
March 02, 2011, 13:26
Richard English
Cairo - Biro, giro, pyro, tyro...?

Tunisia to follow, although to my mind it's tricker.


Richard English
March 02, 2011, 20:15
Kalleh
That's why I am using Tunis...it's not so bad.
March 03, 2011, 00:47
Richard English
The only rhyme I can think of immediately is "newness" Frown


Richard English
March 03, 2011, 02:09
BobHale
Depends on whether you try to rhyme it as "tue-niss" or as "tune- iss" because then you have things like "do this", "view miss" etc.


"No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson.
March 03, 2011, 05:21
<Proofreader>
Ooops! I was rhyming it with Cape Cod.
March 03, 2011, 08:38
Richard English
quote:
Originally posted by BobHale:
Depends on whether you try to rhyme it as "tue-niss" or as "tune- iss" because then you have things like "do this", "view miss" etc.

Although the stress is slight, I would say "TUN-iss" (although "Tun-ISS-ia).


Richard English
March 03, 2011, 20:22
Kalleh
Now, remember, this isn't OEDILF. We don't have to have perfect rhymes. So, anything rhyming with "tune" would work...adding an "is" or "es." I don't think it will be too hard.
March 04, 2011, 01:18
Richard English
But "Tune is" is a homophone of Tunis. To rhyme the initial letter must be different.

And most of the obvious words - like boon, coon and goon don't work in UK English, simply because Tunis is pronouced (in my part of England, anyway) as "TYOOnis", not "TOONis". However, alongside "newnness" I could think of a few more using separate words like "dune" and "hewn" that might fit.


Richard English
March 04, 2011, 05:42
<Proofreader>
TOONis for me
March 04, 2011, 08:26
Guy Barry
quote:

And most of the obvious words - like boon, coon and goon don't work in UK English, simply because Tunis is pronouced (in my part of England, anyway) as "TYOOnis", not "TOONis".


They still rhyme, though. It's only the vowel sound that has to be the same - the consonant sound before the vowel doesn't matter. "Tune" rhymes with "moon" in the British pronunciation as well as the American one.
March 04, 2011, 13:09
Richard English
quote:
Originally posted by Guy Barry:
quote:

And most of the obvious words - like boon, coon and goon don't work in UK English, simply because Tunis is pronouced (in my part of England, anyway) as "TYOOnis", not "TOONis".


They still rhyme, though. It's only the vowel sound that has to be the same - the consonant sound before the vowel doesn't matter. "Tune" rhymes with "moon" in the British pronunciation as well as the American one.

I would call it a near rhyme. A;though the letter "y" is technically a consonant it has many vowel-like characteristics and to me the sound "yoo" is quite different from the sound "oo". I know that for some, words like "mew" and "moo" are pronounced much the same - but not in my part of the world.


Richard English
March 04, 2011, 13:33
BobHale
If everything in life was easy it wouldn't be any fun, would it?


"No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson.
March 04, 2011, 19:53
shufitz
Allowing for variant pronunciations and for near-rhymes, I'd think the possibilities include:
March 05, 2011, 01:53
Guy Barry
quote:
Originally posted by Richard English:
quote:
Originally posted by Guy Barry:
It's only the vowel sound that has to be the same - the consonant sound before the vowel doesn't matter. "Tune" rhymes with "moon" in the British pronunciation as well as the American one.

I would call it a near rhyme. Although the letter "y" is technically a consonant it has many vowel-like characteristics and to me the sound "yoo" is quite different from the sound "oo". I know that for some, words like "mew" and "moo" are pronounced much the same - but not in my part of the world.


I don't think I've come across the claim that "moon" and (British) "tune" didn't rhyme before. Flanders and Swann, those most British of songwriters, certainly thought so:

It's a satellite moon,
It's a plagiarized tune...

Or let's pick a word where the "y" sound is present in both UK and US pronunciation, such as "view". Are you claiming that it doesn't rhyme with "crew"? Lewis Carroll thought so:

Yet at first sight the crew were not pleased with the view,
Which consisted of chasms and crags.

(From the Hunting of the Snark - recently discussed!)
March 05, 2011, 06:38
Richard English
As I wrote, I reckon they are near-rhymes. Close enough for most purposes but not perfect for my southeast English ear, Lewis Carrol notwithstanding. I would say that "crew" rhymes with "clue" and "view" rhymes with "queue" ("croo" and "cloo" versus "vyoo" and "kyoo").

Tune and June, similarly, are not perfect rhymes - unless one agrees that "tunes" is pronounced as "toons" - which I do not.

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Richard English
March 05, 2011, 08:59
Guy Barry
Interesting. Does anyone else agree with Richard's judgement? It never occurred to me that "crew" and "view" were anything less than perfect rhymes. All the online rhyming dictionaries I can find list them.
March 05, 2011, 11:19
Richard English
I think you need to be careful with the likes of RhymeZone. For "view" it lists crew as a perfect rhyme, Crewe (which is identical to crew in my version of English) as a near-rhyme and cue ( a perfect rhyme to me) as a near rhyme.


Richard English
March 06, 2011, 08:16
<Proofreader>
I have several rhyming dics but find it is easiest to use RhymeZone, taking into consideration their flaws.
March 06, 2011, 08:25
Mike
For me, tune and June rhyme perfectly, whilst tune and moon do not (near-rhymes). With crew and view, I find that the y has a smaller effect, and these are near enough perfect rhymes to my ear.

I think it's fair to say that we all have different pronunciations of many words, and it's almost impossible to convince others that our own interpretation is the correct one, despite the fact that we all know it to be so.
March 06, 2011, 21:25
Kalleh
And...remember...this is not OEDILF. We are going for fun here...not perfect rhymes (which to some aren't perfect anyway). BTW, there are some classic rhyming dictionaries out there, beyond the online rhymezone. The one we have is quite well respected (Whitefield's University Rhyming Dictionary), and yet I am not sure I agree with all their U (you) rhymes: "KU - coo, coup, q, Q, cue, queue, skew, aku, baku, cuckoo, coo-coo (slang), askew, barbecue." People's pronunciations are just so different. We'll never agree on every word. Near rhymes are fine.
March 07, 2011, 00:00
Guy Barry
The issue I'm raising here isn't one of how people pronounce words, though. It's which words they consider to be rhymes, given a particular pronunciation. I think all of us here probably pronounce "crew" and "view" in much the same way - the first with a pure "oo" vowel, the second with a "y" sound before the same vowel. Yet it seems that some people regard them as rhymes, others don't. That must mean that some people have a different concept of "rhyme" from others.

According to Wikipedia, "two words rhyme if their final stressed vowel and all following sounds are identical". As far as I'm concerned, "crew" and "view" fit this definition - the final stressed vowel is "oo" in both cases, and there are no following sounds to take into account. The "y" sound is irrelevant, because it comes *before* the stressed vowel, not after.

The "y" sound is technically known as a "semivowel" rather than a consonant, and
I appreciate that some people might regard the "yoo" sound as a rising diphthong rather than a consonant-vowel combination. But the stress is still on the "oo" part, so I don't believe that it affects the rhyme.

I'm no expert on phonetics, though. Is there a definitive answer?
March 07, 2011, 02:18
Richard English
quote:
The "y" sound is technically known as a "semivowel" rather than a consonant, and
I appreciate that some people might regard the "yoo" sound as a rising diphthong rather than a consonant-vowel combination. But the stress is still on the "oo" part, so I don't believe that it affects the rhyme.

I agree except insofar as I do not agree that dipthongs can rhyme with pure vowels.

quote:
For me, tune and June rhyme perfectly, whilst tune and moon do not (near-rhymes).

For me June and moon are perfect rhymes and neither rhymes with tune.

Mind you, in the UK we have probably the widest range of regional pronuciations of any country - certainly of any country as small as ours.


Richard English
March 07, 2011, 15:28
shufitz
quote:
Originally posted by Guy Barry:
... "view". Are you claiming that it doesn't rhyme with "crew"? Lewis Carroll thought so:

Yet at first sight the crew were not pleased with the view,
Which consisted of chasms and crags.
(From the Hunting of the Snark)
What an inspired find, Guy. You spurred me to look for a moon/tune rhyme among the literary lions. It is with pride that I report this, Swinburne, Prologue to The Two Noble Kinsmen:I agree with you, Richard: it ain't perfect.
I agree with you, Guy: it's good enough, by a wide margin.
March 07, 2011, 20:08
Kalleh
Geez 24 responses to the word to write the limerick about. Not bad, Shu! You should come around more often. Wink

I'll get mine to you.
March 08, 2011, 03:15
Guy Barry
I'm quite interested in this topic so I took it to the linguistics newsgroup sci.lang - you can read the thread here. There's a certain amount of technical vocabulary but I think most of the discussion is suitable for non-specialists.
March 08, 2011, 20:14
Kalleh
Interesting discussion, Guy. Maybe some of those posters would like to join us here? We'd love a few more people to schmooze with.

BTW, I am pretty happy with my submission! I know, though, that Richard won't vote for it because one of the rhymes isn't "perfect".
March 09, 2011, 00:14
Guy Barry
I'm not sure if you'd really want the forum overrun by a bunch of academic linguists!

One newsgroup you might be interested in is alt.usage.english. It's not as technical as sci.lang, and is aimed at anyone with an interest in the English language and how it's used. I used to participate quite a lot.
March 09, 2011, 00:43
Richard English
quote:
Originally posted by Kalleh:
Interesting discussion, Guy. Maybe some of those posters would like to join us here? We'd love a few more people to schmooze with.

BTW, I am pretty happy with my submission! I know, though, that Richard won't vote for it because one of the rhymes isn't "perfect".

I might - it depends on its other virtues. As you know, I choose not to vote for my own - and I have submitted for this placename - so I will have to select another's entry.


Richard English
March 09, 2011, 11:53
<Proofreader>
quote:
As you know, I choose not to vote for my own


Thou doth protest too much....
March 10, 2011, 00:49
Guy Barry
Is one allowed to vote for one's own entry, then? Surely that renders the whole game rather pointless, since (as far as I can tell) most people voting will have also submitted an entry.
March 10, 2011, 03:07
Mike
People voting for their own limericks is rather difficult to police, but is generally considered to be very bad form.
March 10, 2011, 05:23
Richard English
If there were large numbers of voters - a hundred or more - to vote for no more than a dozen limericks then it wouldn't matter. As it is the numbers of voters is roughly equivalent to the numbers of limericks submitted, so if we all voted for our own there would never be a result.


Richard English
March 14, 2011, 20:07
Kalleh
quote:
People voting for their own limericks is rather difficult to police, but is generally considered to be very bad form.
Oh, I don't think so, Mike. If you really prefer yours to any of the others, I say go for it. I just never have preferred one of mine since everyone here is so talented!

Now, Shu, can we vote?
March 15, 2011, 06:48
Greg S
No not yet - I've only just discovered the game. I keep waiting for notification by email in the previous game (for which I have notifications by email on) that the new game is open, but it seems not many people do that. Eventually I realise the game may already be underway and check in to see, as I just did. I need 24 hours at least.


Regards Greg
March 15, 2011, 16:54
Greg S
OK - I've put one in.


Regards Greg
March 15, 2011, 16:59
Greg S
Re - voting for your own. We have had this discussion many times. I really don't want to hear it again (except when a new member asks the question). Frankly I don't think anybody here actually does vote for their own, but if you honestly think yours is the best, I don't see anything wrong with voting for it. When I really believe mine is clearly the best, which I think may have happened once, I simply abstain from voting.


Regards Greg
March 15, 2011, 20:20
Kalleh
quote:
When I really believe mine is clearly the best, which I think may have happened once, I simply abstain from voting.
In that case, I'd say go ahead and vote for your own. It's not like there's a huge award for the winner! Wink