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August 11, 2020, 02:57
BobHale
A question that has me stumped
One of my Chinese friends is writing a thesis on the poems of Kenneth Rexroth. From time to time he asks me for the meaning of word or phrase and, until now, I have been able to answer every question. However...

Today he has come across the line "Thought wanders like goose-crossed smoke." and I have had to admit that I haven't the faintest idea what that means. Anyone here ever encountered this phrase? Googling just brings up copies of the poem that it comes from.


"No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson.
August 11, 2020, 03:07
Geoff
Geese fly away; smoke dissipates. Impermanence is the issue, IMHO.
August 11, 2020, 03:09
BobHale
But why "goose crossed"?


"No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson.
August 11, 2020, 03:11
BobHale
Just a terrible mixed metaphor? And why "crossed"?


"No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson.
August 11, 2020, 03:25
BobHale
Someone on one of my facebook groups suggests that the image is of smoke from a fire rising and geese flying through it causing it to drift apart and so the idea is of the thoughts breaking into other thoughts and, as you suggested, dissipating.


"No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson.
August 11, 2020, 08:58
haberdasher
Never heard it put that way before, but that's what I would come up with if you asked me to interpret it.
August 13, 2020, 04:46
Geoff
Not apropos the question, but since it popped into my mind I'll post it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W9VrgRIgOK0
August 13, 2020, 12:50
haberdasher
...and while we're on the subject - "Go Tell Aunt Rhody that the old grey goose is dead".

(This is an early Burl Ives album, and Aunt R is a good way down, at 15:45.)

I grew up with this very album, 75 years ago! (Okay, okay, it was only 73...)

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August 13, 2020, 19:43
Kalleh
I have no idea, Bob. i couldn't find anything about it in Google.
August 14, 2020, 06:37
Geoff
Annnnd, let's not forget "Smoke Gets in Your Eyes: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H2di83WAOhU

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August 14, 2020, 14:57
haberdasher
Yup, that one, too.
August 14, 2020, 20:16
BobHale
Definitively.

(Is there any indication on your screen that that's a clickable link? They used to appear as a different colour on my screen but now they look like the rest of the text so that it's only by mouse over that I know there's a link there at all. Not very user friendly. I will edit the post to bold it and make it clearer but it's irritating to have to do that.


"No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson.
August 16, 2020, 10:01
Geoff
I must be too old. I've not heard any of those Goose-themed songs. I know about this Goose, though: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grumman_G-21_Goose

Oh, and I remember the Beach Boys song, "Little Goose Poop."https://genius.com/The-beach-boys-little-deuce-coupe-lyrics Oh, my mistake. I must have misheard "deuce coupe." No wonder I never understood it.
August 16, 2020, 19:54
Kalleh
As for the link, Bob, it was underlined so that would indicate to me it's a link.
August 17, 2020, 08:40
Robert Arvanitis
The flock-passing-smoke / transience is most likely, but I instinctively went to smoked-goose...


RJA
August 17, 2020, 10:23
Geoff
Good one, RJA! Thanks for returning!
August 17, 2020, 18:50
Kalleh
Interesting, Robert. I looked and looked on Google and found lots of weird things - but nothing like that.
August 17, 2020, 19:07
Robert Arvanitis
Guess I'm just lucky with food...
https://www.thespruceeats.com/...-goose-recipe-335509


RJA
August 22, 2020, 18:57
Kalleh
Now, that looks great!
September 02, 2020, 06:47
bethree5
Goosey goosey gander,
Whither do you wander?
Upstairs and downstairs
And in my lady's chamber...


As a teen I told my mother this nursery rhyme always gave me a really bad feeling-- was there something in my past she wasn't telling me about?
Yes but not what I imagined: when I was about 18 months old the landlady's goose-- taller than I was-- waddled over and bit me. Eek
September 06, 2020, 19:48
Kalleh
That is really weird, Bethree. I am sure that's it. Kids are more perceptive than we think.
September 07, 2020, 06:33
Geoff
Ouch! Geese can bite much harder than most people realize. Been there, have the t-shirt.
I've also been "goosed" by a duck. Lesson: Never get between a mama goose or duck and her offspring!

If one believer Bruno Bettelheim, all nursery rhymes and fairy tales have dark messages. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Uses_of_Enchantment
September 07, 2020, 06:48
Robert Arvanitis
We forget how hard life was for our ancestors, how the plague inspired "ring around the roses"
It's a wonder we can read fairy tales with a smile.


RJA
September 07, 2020, 07:51
BobHale
quote:
Originally posted by Robert Arvanitis:
We forget how hard life was for our ancestors, how the plague inspired "ring around the roses"
It's a wonder we can read fairy tales with a smile.


The way the world has been going recently, I'm trying to forget how hard things will be for our descendants.


"No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson.
September 07, 2020, 09:01
Geoff
Descendants??? What an optimist!

RJA is, I think, dead-on right. Imagine Disney doing fairy tales as they were originally. Not syrupy kid stuff. Grimm indeed.
September 09, 2020, 19:46
Kalleh
Geoff, you and Bob are a bit negative. Wink

Times will get better. We just have to be patient and do our best to promote real change.