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I have stalled on my poetry writing recently so I am doings a new project 35 days – 35 poems. To this end I have done a random search for stock images on the internet and picked, more or less at random 35 of them into a file. For the next 35 days I will be selecting an image a day and writing a poem inspired by it. The images are intentionally diverse and hopefully will produce some good new work. As the images are only there to kick of my mental processes the final results may have little or nothing obvious in the way of connection with them. So the poems will be presented here without the images. You can find them over at The Hitting The Road Again Blues. I will also repost them here so that people who don't care to read my blog can see them and comment. All comments, good or bad, welcome - except the ones that say "but this isn't a poem". the first poem is called "Bubbles" Sometimes I think there is no surface to be breached; that the ocean is infinite above me and infinite below me. Sometimes I think there is no destination to be reached; that the future and the past alike have naught to show me. Sometimes I think that every word of meaning in the world, is a word that other voices have already spoken. Sometimes I think these bubbles that enclose our lives- these surface tension spheres - cannot be burst or broken. Sometimes I think these random, dancing interactions as we jostle side by side have deeper matter. But sometimes I think we are no more than teeming water in which the bubbles touch only briefly, and then scatter. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | ||
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This poem makes me think of the "butterfly effect," or Donne's Meditation XVII. It is no measure of health to be well adjusted to a profoundly sick society. -J. Krishnamurti | |||
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Poem #2 - The Day The Sun Set I remember the rocks a hundred feet below the cliff top path where we waited palm to palm in the salt wind. I remember the ocean every swell and blow, pink within grey, as sunset created phantom veins beneath its shifting skin. I remember your breath as the cold encompassing air, made visible your silent sighs, revealed wistfulness and secret dreaming. I remember darkness: the sun no longer there, taking with its fire the light from your eyes and leaving love's single final gleaming.This message has been edited. Last edited by: BobHale, "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Today would be my mother's birthday if she were still alive so the poem is dual purpose, one of my annual memorial poems and a poem prompted by the next random picture in my 35 poems exercise. Poem #3 -Bright Lines, And Dark The clicking of a stick upon the ground behind me as I walk to the shops. A face that, in its contours, resembles yours. Fish cakes at a dinner party the way you made them. Cliff Richard on the radio "I like him," I hear you say. An amber teardrop pendant in a shop window like the one you lost. A smell of lilac in the park - you sleep in a chair in our old garden. A folded wheelchair in the corner of the pharmacy. A few raindrops spatter against the window: umbrellas in funereal black. Lines, bright and dark, join me to the past. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Oh, Bob, those are excellent...deep thinking and meaningful. They make me realize how insignificant limericks can be, though they are fun, I guess. | |||
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Apples and Oranges - a good limerick can be every bit as hard to write as any other form and just because these three opening poems aren't comic doesn't mean we won't get some eventually. Either way, thank you for your kind words. I am sure others here write "proper" poetry too, if only they'd just admit it. No point in writing it if no one ever sees it.This message has been edited. Last edited by: BobHale, "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Poem #4-The Last Place Somewhere there is a wild place that none have ever seen, where the sapphire of the lake laps against the emerald green. Black mountains striped with snow circle round the shore. Deer drink the cooling water. Above the eagles soar. No man has set foot here and no man ever will. It is the final secret place that lies beyond the hill. No human eyes beheld it. No skin has felt its breeze or sheltered from the noon sun beneath its towering trees. There must always be a last place that none have ever seen remembering the world as, perhaps, it might have been. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Poem #5-Yellow yellow as the sunflower that apes the yellow sun yellow as the egg-yolk that splits and starts to run yellow as the school bus that takes the children home yellow as the amber of my mother's favourite comb yellow as canaries singing in the trees yellow as the corn and yellow as the cheese yellow as a swallowtail upon a summer flower yellow as a lemon drop its taste so sharp and sour yellow as the buttercups uncounted in the fields yellow as the gold that the rainbow has concealed yellow as the lemon with its bitterness within and yellow as the jaundice that creeps across his skin "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Have you ever read Jack Gilbert? http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/failing-and-flying/ I feel a bit of him in your work. It is no measure of health to be well adjusted to a profoundly sick society. -J. Krishnamurti | |||
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No, but I shall now. Thank you. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Yes, Bob, I agree that a good limerick can be hard to write (from experience!). I guess my point should have been that, while I do like limericks, I prefer a deeper poetry. But that's what it is...a personal preference. That's all. I enjoyed "Yellow." Some of the poems remind me of Haikus, even though they don't meet the Haiku criteria. | |||
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Poem #6-Rainbows In The Water The city does not move. It is black and fixed and firm against the twilight grey, but it pours bright rainbows that twist and turn and squirm into the waters of the bay. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Poem #7: A Box Of Rainbows There are pictures on the pages but they're all in black and white. Here's a picture of a dragon who is menacing a knight. On the next page there are flowers, on the next page, it's a cat. Here's another of a sailing boat and a donkey in a hat. She chooses one to colour (a fine and handsome fox) and selects an orange pencil from her rainbow in a box. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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What a fun thread, Bob! Thanks for sharing, I'm enjoying these. RE: Jack Gilbert - I run an annual poetry discussion for my book club, & included the very poem linked above in our hat-tip to recently-deceased poets. | |||
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Poem # 8 - Creatures of the Depths I'm not really sure about today's poem. The picture prompt was a painting of some of the weird creatures that live in the deepest parts of the ocean but my metaphorical use seems a little contrived to me. There are creatures in the depths that I cannot comprehend, that are alien to me with lives I can't pretend I shall ever understand no matter how I try. I shall simply shake my head with a loud despairing sigh. There are creatures in the depths that are strangers to the light that are mysterious and different to any that I might be able to explain by a deeper contemplation. I shall simply shake my head and admit my admiration. There are creatures in the depths that are quite beyond belief, and though I catch a fleeting glance it simply is too brief to form a good hypothesis of the nature of their lives. I shall simply shake my head with a wonder that survives. There are creatures in the depths, there are creatures in the dark of whom I know so little it is folly to remark that these things called "women" are a species far removed. I shall simply shake my head till their benevolence is proved. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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This one seems likely written right after being spurned by a lover. It was written on the twenty-second anniversary of my having my brains knocked out. It is no measure of health to be well adjusted to a profoundly sick society. -J. Krishnamurti | |||
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Poem #9 - Travellers' Tales We sat at the broken table in the wooden hut at the end of the jetty and drank beer, telling tales of travels until the barman shut and locked the doors and drew his own chair near. Outside the sky turned black the sea a darker green; inside the tales grew rambling and empty bottles mounted. We waved our arms, drew pictures with our hands to set the scene and one by one our stories were remembered and recounted. And eventually it grew light again as we had filled the night with all our separate tales and filled each ale-fogged head with recollections of our pasts and of other pasts that might not have been our own but which held a common thread. And with the light we rose and went on our different ways to different unknown futures from our different lives. The momentary conjugation that had joined our common days had broken with the dawn, though a lifetime later, the memory survives. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Poem #10 - Storm I'm a little unsure about this one. It would almost certainly be better as a prose piece but I was uninspired by the picture for today (of clouds) so I wrote about a true incident when I went for a walk on the south downs and got caught in the rain. It's a structural piece but not, I feel, an especially good one. For what it's worth, here it is. The morning that had begun warm turned cooler, then cloudy, then showery.. I chose to cut my walk shorter across the downs towards the path along the coast. The decision was made too late the rain came came harder came heavier I tried to shelter in the lee of a bush at the side of the path Then I tried to run for the trees huddled down shortest route dripping wet And halfway to that better shelter my phone rang rang again and again And when at last I was there pressed back against the bark under dripping leaves I called you back with soaking hands under a tree in a storm to just say "hi!" "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Incidentally the poems for the 26th-30th will all be posted on 1st May because although I will write them I will be away from my computer for a few days revisiting Xi'An. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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I really like #10. Does that poetic format have a name? | |||
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Poem #11: Maths Facts The number of seconds from birth until death. The average time you take drawing a breath. The shapes of your world in both two- and three-D. The sum of the series of all you can be. Differentiate separate parts of the strife. Integrate them together creating your life. On the X- and Y-axes you consider the plot Of your Boolean values with AND, OR and NOT. Your waking and sleeping draw up on a chart. Plot the infinite functions of breaking your heart. And when it's all proven you can add QED Where they've already carved out a firm RIP. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Poem #12 - The Garden Another dual purpose poem this time. The inspiring picture was of a pair of weathered hands gently cupping a shoot that was growing from the soil. But today would also be my father's birthday and the picture made me think of him in his healthy days, in his garden. That house belongs to someone else now and last time I went past I could see from the road that they had torn everything he had built and grown down and were in the process of remaking it all in their own style and taste. There was a long, lingering sadness as I realised that a part of him that had remained was now also gone. I imagine your garden is different now. They'll have torn down your greenhouse, your shed and your trees. You built it all up by the sweat of your brow They'll have made it their own, they'll have done as they please. Your kingdom expired with your own final breath. It passed from your hands into hands now unknown. It could not survive past the day of your death. Gone now the fruits of the seeds you had sown. The row of tomato plants lining the fence, The hydrangea bushes overgrown at the back. The hawthorn so tangled, so thorny and dense, Perhaps now all things that the garden will lack. The shrubs and the climbers, the flowers and the veg All of it changed now, all of it gone The lawn and the apple tree, footpath and hedge, Without their old master could never go on. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Oh, Bob, that is so touching. I am sorry about your loss. | |||
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Poem #13 Lost He was lost: it felt like hours since he'd known his way. He hadn't seen a single soul to ask where his route lay. He went one way, then another. He took this road then that, but nothing seemed familiar- he was lost and that was that. He didn't know which way to go. The streets all looked the same. He started to retrace his steps, go back the way he came. He saw a lighted window and went in with a cheer. The barman said, “Back so soon?” And poured another pint of beer. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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I can tell you're missing England! | |||
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I have been continuing the project while on holiday but had no chance to post so until I catch up I'll post three a day. Poem #14: Cracks I put my foot down and the earth shatters like crazed porcelain. I imagine the cracks stretching down and down through the Earth, through the top soil and the bedrock, the crust, the mantle, the core. I imagine them reversing their path up and up through the Earth, appearing in mirror image half a world away from here, where someone looks down imagining a world that ends with me. Poem #15: Purple She watches the butterflies dance for her: red and gold, white and black and suddenly she spies a momentary purple, a single strand of a different thread pulled through time. It circles her head and settles on her hand and slowly the colour bleeds from it and into her, spreading like a stain into her fingers into her hand and arm. It stretches tight across her skin and then beyond, into the air. The grass and trees, the earth and sky adopt its hue. And the butterfly, as white as a snowflake, lifts and drifts away. Poem #16:The Machine Every day he came to tend to the machine, stood watching its mysterious motions; the cogs turning in locked synchrony; the rods and pistons rhythmic push and pull; the ratchets ratcheting; the flywheels flying. Every day her carefully dripped oil into the correct points and channels; watched it ooze to the machine's heart; watched it spread renewal to the actions. And every day he wondered, “What is it all for?” "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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So glad you're back, if at least for a short time. I love "Purple." | |||
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Poem # 17 Unundoable You can't put a chicken back into a shell. A secret once told, you cannot untell. You can't unscramble eggs; you can't unbake a cake. You can't follow a path that you once didn't take. You can't unsay the words that in anger were said, or, after the guillotine, glue back the head. You can't call back the bullet or unfire the gun. Sometimes you must live with the things you have don Poem #18 Eye of the beholder The objectors say, “Take them away, we want our green fields back!” But they look to me like metal trees as I walk down the track. In passing by, “Beholder's eye” I murmur with a smile I'd watch for hours these turning towers That others so revile. Poem #19 metaphor I toss sand grains - a handful- into the water: the ripples make a metaphor. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Transferring the next batch from notebook to computer the spell checker objected to my abbreviating "together is" to "together's". Nothing unexpected there. The suggested "correction" was to make it "tog ether's". That seems so much more likely! "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Poem #20 Ghosts In the Subway There are ghosts in the subway, memories of footsteps. The acoustics of fear reveal them There are ghosts in the subway, shadows of the fearful. The unstable light reveals them. There are ghosts in the subway, icy drafts across your skin. The night-drawn breeze reveals them. There are ghosts in the subway, perfumes and fetid funks. The miasma of the past reveals them. There are ghosts in the subway, the iron taste of fate. Your rising terror reveals them. There are ghosts in the subway, yesterday's ghosts and today's. Tomorrow's light reveals them. Poem #21 Solar System In the shop, a row of globes in coloured glass with inset stones stands upon the table. Each has a different range of jeweled hues and tones from ivory to sable. But all are Earth in different shades the oceans blue or black or red the land picked out in rainbows. Worlds as they might have been if travelling other paths instead of those familiar ones we know. Poem #22 Smile For The Camera Posing for photos with smiles on their faces that die when the shutter has clicked. The truth of the moment is one that camera is never equipped to depict. The family together's the family apart it tears at itself like a beast. They gather for Christmas and let their resentments boil over to flavour the feast. They peck at each other and peck at their food. Their words are as sharp as their knives. This one day of duty lasts for eternity and then they go back to their lives. But this anger is private, a family matter, no outsider could ever predict, or know from the photos that the smiles on their faces had died when the shutter had clicked. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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And that's caught up. From tomorrow it's back to one poem a day. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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I really like your different types of poems. Mine all sound alike. | |||
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Poem #23 Another Thousand Sunsets Another thousand sunsets, like the thousand gone before. When the last one's over, there will start a thousand more. Sunsets in the mountains, in the deserts, in the town. Sunsets on the ocean where it seems the sun might drown. I have seen them over forest; I have seen them over field; Watched the ruby-painted sky that the twilight has revealed. I have seen them when I'm sober; I have seen them when I'm drunk; I have seen them in high spirits and when my heart has sunk. I have seen them when I'm lonely, I have seen them by love's light; I have seen the dying of the day and the fires it can ignite. And every time I watch again as the darkness starts to fall I remember every one of them, I can recall them all. There'll be another thousand sunsets. I know that this is true. But the best thing about sunsets is that sunrise will come too.This message has been edited. Last edited by: BobHale, "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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It sounds a little, to me, like you are ready to go home. | |||
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Not at all, the poems are just being inspired by the pictures. This one was a collage of vertical strips each showing a section of a different sunset.This message has been edited. Last edited by: BobHale, "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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inadvertantly missed yesterday so two today Poem #24 A Wiser Choice He planted apples but, in hindsight, might have made a wiser choice, Because if God had planted lemons, they'd have listened to his voice. The trouble is that apples are tasty and they're sweet While Eve might have found a lemon a less pleasant thing to eat And the serpent would have found Eve a harder sell And there'd still be just TWO people, in Eden where they'd dwell. Poem # 25 Keys at the bottom of the drawer keys on iron rings keys on threaded strings at the bottom of the drawer keys shining as if new keys almost rusted through keys falling to the floor keys to start a car keys to a mini bar and the tantalus inside keys to shed and gate keys for a roller skate and a hundred more beside barrel keys and Yale keys that might for a jail keys to start a boat keys for a clockwork train and for the cover on the drain keys for locking up a goat for windows and for doors keys to open bureau drawers keys giant and keys small keys for tiny locks keys for an empty box why did we keep them all the truth is of course that I not only don't know why but don't know what they're for could be, for all I see , for a belt for chastity but there are truly keys galore and if I ever say let's throw them all away the answer is “let's not” you just don't know that they won't be needed some fine day so we'd better keep the lot "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Poem #26 My Special Perfect hell The tables were laid out with books in perfect piles. I saw them from a distance, with a sigh. A book fair, I gave a cheer as I raced along the aisles. It was something that I never could pass by. I never stopped to think that I was in a foreign land in China where I now had come to dwell, and the books held only words that I couldn't understand a torment from my special perfect hell. (Inspired by a picture of a library, and a true incident last year) "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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"...my special perfect hell." Wow. | |||
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Poem #27 Fireworks It begins with red crackling static and crisscross swordplay in brightest white. A flower with ivory petals dipped in blood; tendrils that creep into the night; two sunflowers, two hundred feet tall; a garden is created above us. Shoots grow and spread from the moss that has grown on the sky. Sparks spit from the heated barrel of a gun; a thousand rflaming arrows suddenly curve earthward and vanish into the fire of battle. And everything ends in chaos and confusion as blood pours from the creeping veins to stain the tree tops. The sun explodes – a magnificent fireball that devours the earth, shrinks back to a point and leaves us in darkness. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Poem #28 It didn't rain today Today it didn't rain - nor yesterday, it's true. Tomorrow I'm expecting that the skies will still be blue. In the last six months I've been here it's rained precisely twice - a total of ten minutes (well nine to be precise). But there are plenty of umbrellas to be seen in gaudy hues because the sun gets rather fierce so the shade is what they choose. But if raindrops ever spatter I'm sure enough to bet that they'll fold them in a moment and not let them get wet. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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I remember a great cover to a National Geographic which took place in China. There were thousands of colorful umbrellas being carried by riders on bicycles. I looked for it online, but couldn't find it. | |||
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Three together again because I've been lax in posting. Poem #29 The Chimneys of Bilston, the Chimneys of Baiyin The chimneys of Bilston fell one by one like flowers that were dying away from the sun. For the industry that in the town had once thrived, the summer had gone and the winter arrived. Their smoke that had filled so much of the sky drifted thinner and thinner and was lost to the eye. Now little remains to mark their old place. Time has changed everything, has erased every trace. The chimneys of Baiyin are always in sight. They spring up like weeds in search of the light. In and out of the city, they surround and they fill. It's the height of their season, they are kings of the hill. Their smoke rises like prayers straight up to the sky, gradually spreading and drawing the eye.., but one day they too, like Bilston's old towers, will find that time is implacable and always devours. Poem #30 A Wall Ten Feet Thick He built it all up, day by day, brick by brick; surrounded himself with a wall ten feet thick. He could not get out but they could not get in. No arrows or slings could damage his skin. Immune from life's troubles, immune from life's pain, every day he examined his fortress again. He was happy and certain he was safe and secure. Nothing could touch him of this he was sure. Then one day he died and the walls tumbled down and the look on his face was a great startled frown. Poem #31 Pumpkin Thoughts The pumpkin on the table was waiting there with dread. She came into the kitchen and the pumpkin quaked and said, “Is it Halloween already? This is such a rotten life. Hey! Be careful what you're doing. You'll take my eye out with that knife.” "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Fallen slightly behind but I'll catch up later today. Poem #32 I have a little penguin. I have a little penguin. he's just six inches tall. He lives upon a shelf that is on my bedroom wall. I have a little penguin. I used to have a moose but he ran away one day and now he's on the loose. I don't know where he went or if I was to blame I only know he disappeared the day the penguin came. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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And here are the final three. Poem #33 Hypochondria I used to have this roommate. (I don't have him any more.) He filled up all the shelf spaces with bottles by the score. He had pills for every ailment, ointments, potions and a large box of suppositories (labeled, "Care, by hand.") All of them were quackery - nostrums of all kinds - imaginary vitamins, with effects just in his mind. For the only thing he suffered from in reality, I'm sure was a chronic hypochondria that none of them could cure. Poem #34 Insignificance We ought to see the Earth from a million miles away, with all its insignificance in a trivial display. We ought to go still further till it's wholly lost to view and then perhaps we'll realise that we mean nothing too. Poem #35 The Storm We stood in the shelter on the seafront and watched the storm The clouds open and rain came like bullets from the sky. Lightning tore the night into jagged fragments that day would restore. We stood side by side, not speaking, not acknowledging each other. And when the deluge eased, we walked away into separate existences. And that, ladies and gentlemen, concludes this little project. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Not part of the 35 Days project but new work from me anyway. The way that I bombed out in round one of the Bilston Love Slam a couple of years ago shows what a dab hand I am with love poetry. I like to think I'm pretty good with poetry on most topics but love poetry eludes me. Now however it seems that it is required of me. I have mentioned in passing that I have a new Chinese girlfriend. You may have missed it, but it was there. And she loves poetry. Like many Chinese she is prone to throwing in classical Chinese poetry quotes which she then, with difficulty, explains to me. Anyway, the night we met she wrote a long piece on her QQ blog which I have only just seen. I ran it through all sorts of translators - the one on the phone, Google, Bing, several others. From the aggregate translations I managed to work out what it said and it was, in effect, a long prose-poem love song. About me. Weird, huh? Anyway. I took the best phrases from the various translations and mashed them up into a poem. It's the first of the two below and of course it can't properly be called my work. It is, at best, a collaboration between me and her. It needed a response and so I wrote the second piece which describes the same night from my point of view. It's nowhere near as lyrical as her piece was but then again, as I said, love poetry eludes me. Evidently, still. purple stranger:an experiment in reconstruction (Bob Hale and Yin Chu Shan) waiting a bleak and beautiful posture exotic friends, a casual gathering an unanticipated encounter old names for new Zhou Yu cool wet hair scattered in the neck slow drops of water run down her face Merlot, Lene Marlin melancholy and grace moonlight on the balcony awakening consciousness in a confused mind remembered lives past beyond young love and life with broken hearts the cool earth, the just wind exiting her memory silently saying summer talk of love why not? purple stranger: an experiment in deconstruction (Bob Hale) he sits next to her and does not speak too many faces expect it too many voices demand it too many eyes are watching when he does speak it is with banality trivial conversation unimportant words that he knows are insufficient later there are other songs sung in his voice and hers but still no speaking there are no silent spaces later still there is silence the silence of the night as they walk to her home and he speaks unfamiliar words alone in the darkness he walks slowly building worlds of imagination as he always does constructing transient poetry from drunkenness and beauty and when he sleeps she is poured into his dream "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | |||
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Wow, Bob! I especially like the way, in the final 2 stanzas, the line starts in the particular (alone in the darkness/ he walks slowly), starts to veer toward generalizations but keeps one foot firmly on ground (drunkenness), & -- tying to that word-- plants itself right back in the personal. How lovely that last line is. | |||
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Bob, I really like your love poem with Yin Chu Shan. I assume she's read it? | |||
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