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John Moffat has brought to my attention an odd phrasing in the Guardian's reporting of the tragic death of PC Barker in the recent flooding in Cumbria. The police officer was swept away as he tried to direct traffic away from a dangerous bridge. According to the Guardian, "The policeman's body, still in uniform, was found washed up on a beach ." Does the use of "still in uniform" strike anyone apart from us as being a little odd. Why would the body be anything but "still in uniform"? Would we expect the uniform to have washed away? Would we have expected an on duty officer to be not in uniform? Why mention the uniform at all? It seems to me, as it did to John, to be a strange thing to say. "No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson. | ||
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I think it's one of those qualifiers that are put in to add colour to the report. So you would also get something like, "...The missing girl, still wearing her school uniform, was found..." or "...The toddler, still wearing his pyjamas, was discovered..." It all helps to create a picture in the reader's mind. Richard English | |||
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Ah, but did it say anything about what he was wearing when he vanished? | ||
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Sometimes the strong currents of a flood will rip a person's clothes off. Maybe that's why they added the "still in uniform." | |||
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I think it sounds very odd. Sometimes people fall into or jump into the lake here, and I've never read anything about their clothing. | |||
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I find it unfortunate. It brings to mind the image of the poor fellow in the alternative situation, which is not respectful. | |||
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Here are a few. Big Thompson Flood | 30 years later Denver Post, 07/30/2006
12 Hikers Are Swept Away By Flash Flood in a Canyon Published: Thursday, August 14, 1997
'just feel worthless right now' The Atlanta Journal-Constitution, September 23, 2009
Morrow County A History of Oregon Sheriffs, 1841 to 1991 Hell and High Water
'My momma's body is on the roof' CNN, October 17, 2005
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Has anyone considered the possibility (remote though it may be) that the victim entered the water naked and the force of the flood was so strong that IT CLOTHED HIM IN A UNIFORM. | ||
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Yes, Tinman has found some sites where the clothes were ripped off or referred to. I just wonder how common that is...and I don't think very. I find it too intrusive when I read them. I'd sure hate for this to be said about me: "the unclothed body of Heppner postal clerk Anna McBride was found several blocks away, with her glasses still in place." Then people start imagining.... I think it's more sensitive and responsible journalism not to mention the clothes. The police and investigators would need that evidence. However, why should the public care? | |||
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I agree with Richard that it's just another detail that completes the picture in the reader's mind, and don't find it intrusive. Of course, it's a tragic scene, so that in itself is disquieting. WM | |||
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