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April 08, 2016, 00:28
BobHale
More from my old local paper
Either the 5-year-old is quite a prodigy or the paper could use a new copy editor.

"He was a ‘happy lad’ who adored his family and five-year-old son, who was interested in cars and had studied mechanics at college in Bilston"


"No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson.
April 08, 2016, 14:41
Geoff
The copy editor thinks he's a child progeny. Roll Eyes
April 08, 2016, 20:19
Kalleh
Sometimes when I write fast, I write sentences like that. Editing is so important, isn't it?
April 08, 2016, 20:27
Kalleh
Speaking of editing, I was reviewing one of our publications today, and one of our editors changed the "me" to "I." Shouldn't it be "me?"

"I would say one of the major differences for both my wife and me is that we are living in an enormous city for the first time."
April 08, 2016, 22:26
BobHale
It should. This kind of hypercorrection happens when someone assumes that a common correction in some contexts should be applied in all contexts.


"No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson.
April 09, 2016, 22:18
Kalleh
But this was an editor!
April 10, 2016, 09:07
arnie
Obviously not any good, though.


Build a man a fire and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he's warm for the rest of his life.
April 10, 2016, 14:06
<Proofreader>
Read the sentence without"my wife" to see which word is required.
April 10, 2016, 21:22
Kalleh
To me, the "I" doesn't even sound right. I had been an editor as well; it wasn't my original writing. But I made them change it back to "me," from editor #1's change to "I."

Life can be so complicated!
April 26, 2016, 04:20
BobHale
And another. This one's a cracker!

Tributes have flooded in for a ‘larger than life’ musician Trevor T, who played sessions with iconic reggae band Musical Youth after he passed away on Sunday.


"No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson.
April 26, 2016, 05:17
bethree5
quote:
Originally posted by Kalleh:
But this was an editor!
That editor would not be much help for I.
April 26, 2016, 05:18
bethree5
quote:
Originally posted by BobHale:
And another. This one's a cracker!

Tributes have flooded in for a ‘larger than life’ musician Trevor T, who played sessions with iconic reggae band Musical Youth after he passed away on Sunday.
. On the harp, I assume.
April 26, 2016, 06:50
Geoff
Nah, Gabriel lent him his horn.
April 30, 2016, 22:06
Kalleh
quote:
Tributes have flooded in for a ‘larger than life’ musician Trevor T, who played sessions with iconic reggae band Musical Youth after he passed away on Sunday.

Now, that is a "cracker," as you British say. Was this printed somewhere? I wonder where those copy editors were...probably too interested in looking for prepositions that end a sentence.
May 01, 2016, 00:16
arnie
I think these are from the online version of Bob's local paper. You'd have to go to Bilston to find out if the printed version had the same phrases. I think that often web versions tend to cut out the proof readers more often in the interests of speed. There's usually not the same rush with the paper version, which might even come out weekly. On the other hand, it's much easier to make corrections.


Build a man a fire and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he's warm for the rest of his life.
May 01, 2016, 05:57
<Proofreader>
quote:
Tributes have flooded in for a ‘larger than life’ musician Trevor T, who played sessions with iconic reggae band Musical Youth after he passed away on Sunday.

That may just be a fugitive comma missing after the end of the dependent clause.
May 02, 2016, 20:46
Kalleh
You are probably right, arnie.

That reminds me of a survey we sent out recently. It seemed as though we had proofed it nine ways from Sunday (and I've never figured out where that phrase came from), though clearly we had not, and spell check wouldn't catch the mistake we made:

"What do you consider the prose and cons of..."? Our only hope was people thinking, "I didn't know the plural of pros was prose." Wink
June 09, 2016, 19:18
BobHale
This is from a different local paper...


"Jailed police officer who made fake terror 999 call is sacked by force"


Am I the only one picturing a rather violent dismissal?


"No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money." Samuel Johnson.
June 10, 2016, 05:58
<Proofreader>
Or put in a bag and tossed in the river.
June 11, 2016, 21:27
Kalleh
This came up on a FB feed - from one of those websites about dumping Hillary Clinton: "Hillary is a trader..." Sometimes the ignorance on the website amazes me.