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The phrase "New Maps of Hell" isn't mine. It was the title of a book by Kingsley Amis but it has, googling leads me to believe, been fairly widely used (ripped off) by other people - including me. The poem was something I wrote while travelling. I've forgotten what specifically inspired it. I won't say what I think about this one until I hear what other people think. I wouldn't want to prejudice the outcome one way or the other. (For some of the terminology it probably helps if you are a mathematician by training.) Maps of Hell (c) Robert Hale 2000 The strange geometries of our lives Form fractal paths of lies Arcane as Warlock's spells The topography of our fate The discontinuities of hate Are maps of Hell New maps of Hell The equations of the beat Form shapes of light and heat The tyranny of the bell Sine wave curves of sound Invert the pattern and the ground On maps of Hell New maps of Hell Intersecting sets of dreams Venn matrices of screams A shattered empty shell Broken into random shapes Whose scattered fragments make New maps of Hell New maps of Hell Vescere bracis meis. Read all about my travels around the world here. Read even more of my travel writing and poems on my weblog. | ||
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Well...Poetry is supposed to make you feel...something... This made me feel really mathmatically inferior... | |||
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quote: It isn't a poem about maths though - it's a poem using mathematical metaphors for life in general. Still I take your point,. you need to understand the mathematical terms for the metaphors to make sense. That's one reason why I've never been completely satisfied with it myself. It's a little too obscure. Vescere bracis meis. Read all about my travels around the world here. Read even more of my travel writing and poems on my weblog. | |||
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